Suggested General Comments
Introduction
· You have developed good transition from your introduction to your selection.
· Your introduction needs work to adequately introduce your selection
Verbal Skills
· You express difficult words well.
· You need to work on the pronunciation of difficult words.
· You have appropriate volume changes
· You have good projection, inflection, or enunciation.
· You sometimes slur words.
· Your presentation could be louder. Some words were inaudible.
· You swallowed some words at the end of sentences.
· You used varied voices for dramatic effect.
Mood and Voice
· Your voice changes tone to express the mood.
· Your voice needs to change tone to express the mood.
· You differentiate the voices of characters
· You need to differentiate the voices of characters.
· From your voice, it is east to gauge the mood of the characters.
· You have interesting voice characterization.
· You made the audience fell what you felt.
· Your presentation needs to be louder in volume
Pause and Pace
· You need to speed up or slow down in appropriate places.
· Try pausing for dramatic effect.
· Your delivery was choppy.
· You made good use of dramatic pauses.
· You need to slow down your delivery.
· Your delivery did not sound natural.
Non Verbal Communication Skills
· You need to make eye contact with the audience.
· A smile will capture the audience.
· Look at all the members of the audience. (In multiple reading: look at the character you
are talking to.)
· Keep your body still as you present your selection.
· Try to make use of facial expression to convey the meaning and the mood of the
selection.
· You have expressive eye contact.
· Keep your papers still so they are not distracting.
Poise
· You look somewhat stiff.
· Hold your speech lower so that it is not in front of your mouth
· Try to hold your script still. .
· You have excellent posture while presenting your selection.
· Try not to sway or lean.
General Effectiveness
· You seem to enjoy your selection.
· What a powerful speech, well done.
· You caught the essence of the selection.
· You appeared comfortable with your selection.
· Your selection has potential. Keep practicing.
· You conveyed the mood of the selection
· You seemed to understand the selection.
· You look somewhat stiff.
· Hold your speech lower so that it is not in front of your mouth
· Try to hold your script still.
· You have excellent posture while presenting your selection.
· Try not to sway or lean.
